Talk:Anthony Stolarz/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Sanfranciscogiants17 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk · contribs) 00:59, 24 April 2021 (UTC)Reply


I will be reviewing this! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 00:59, 24 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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Early life

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Amateur

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Philadelphia Flyers

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Edmonton Oilers

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Anaheim Ducks

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  • ”$1.5 million contract, where he served with John Gibson and Ryan Miller in a three-goaltender rotation” – Since he spent most of the season in the minor leagues, I don’t think we should say he was part of a three-goaltender rotation. How about “$1.5 million contract. He had competition for a roster spot, as the Ducks also had veterans John Gibson and Ryan Miller under contract.”
  • Don’t bother to mention the preseason opener debut—not really relevant.

International play

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References

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Kncny11 Great start! Just a few comments; let me know when these are addressed, and I’ll give the article another look! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 11:46, 25 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Sanfranciscogiants17 Thanks for your review! Now that I'm not drowning in work, all comments have been addressed. Kncny11 (shoot) 18:14, 30 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

@Kncny11 Looks great now, passing. Well done! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 00:24, 1 May 2021 (UTC)Reply