Talk:Aonach Meadhoin

Assessment

This is a good, comprehensive looking article for a Munro. A quick check against the GA criteria suggest the following improvements:

• Seems well written though phrases like nodding acquaintance could be improved.
• The geography section is quite dense and could be made easier to follow.
• The lede should be expanded to summarise the article rather than just introduce the subject.
• Other checks against the MoS should be made.
• The Geography section needs in-line cites from the sources listed in the References section.
• Sources look reliable for this subject - I've corrected the mispelling of Donald Bennet which appears on many, many Munro articles.
• Sources are used but need in-line refs adding to avoid OR criticism.
• Appears to deal with most aspects - may want to expand to include etymology and classification - give more context to this particular mountain - any incidents/history?

Assess as B for the time being. Nick Ottery (talk) 16:00, 5 November 2009 (UTC)