Talk:Appu Chesi Pappu Koodu/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:28, 23 August 2016 (UTC)

Reviewing this article tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 20:28, 23 August 2016 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Plot

• "he sends goons to attack him." - Goons is informal

  How about a "mobster"?

  • Yes I think that is more appropriate. MWright96 (talk) 16:10, 24 August 2016 (UTC)

• "Usha, is strained and attempts to marry her off are thwarted." - Who made the attempts for marriage?

  Ramalingam made the attempts and Govindam thwarted them. I have mentioned the same as per your suggestion.

• What exactly is meant that Ramadasu learns his lesson?

  He comes to terms with the reality and apologises for his misdeeds. I have mentioned the same as per your suggestion.

Production

• "N. T. Rama Rao and Savitri were chosen for the leads," - leading parts

  Done

Music

• "Cheyi Cheyi Kaluparave" was parodied by the Indian National Congress as a part of their election campaign during the 1989 general elections." - remove "a"

  Done

Release, reception and legacy

• "considered the Laurel and Hardy of Telugu cinema at the time." - considered by whom?

  It was a film historian's opinion. I have tweaked it accordingly.

References

• no dead links

  Thanks to Internet Archive.

That is what I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 12:41, 24 August 2016 (UTC)

@MWright96: Thanks for taking up the review. I've addressed the concerns you have listed above, and i hope that i have succeeded. Yours truly, Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:38, 24 August 2016 (UTC)

Thanks. Can now promote to GA review. MWright96 (talk) 16:10, 24 August 2016 (UTC)