Talk:Archie Bradley (baseball)

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Harper J. Cole in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Harper J. Cole (talk · contribs) 21:03, 22 July 2021 (UTC)Reply


I'll take on this review, as part of the July 2021 Backlog Drive.--Harper J. Cole (talk) 21:03, 22 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Early life

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Minor leagues

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  • [signed Bradley seventh overall] Either "selected Bradley seventh overall" or "signed Bradley after selecting him seventh overall"
  • [to postpone future free agency and arbitration] Perhaps link to a source explaining how arbitration works in baseball?

2015-16

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2017–18

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  • [At the 2017 National League Wild Card Game] --> "In the 2017 National League Wild Card Game"
  • [His difficulties in July and August] You refer to difficulties in August, but haven't really established those yet. It was implied by the line about his season turning on July 20, but could you clarify that his bad form lasted through the whole season after that?

2019–20

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Philadelphia Phillies

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Pitcher profile

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  • [who transitioned well from the starting rotation to the bullpen] Switch to something like "who was praised for a successful transition from the starting rotation to the bullpen", to make it clear that this is not a POV statement.

Summary

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