Talk:Arden Eversmeyer

Latest comment: 1 year ago by LowellMillGirl in topic removing message regarding article tone/style

removing message regarding article tone/style

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Hello. I've made major revisions and updates to this article. For example, I removed promotional and non-neutral language, removed dead links, added new sources and citations, added headings, and removed the "Honors and awards" heading and material (which listed minor honors such as being a parade marshall -- I left the award from the National Women's History Alliance). Can I please have the advice of an experienced editor: Are we now able to remove the template message regarding article tone/style? Thank you LowellMillGirl (talk) 00:35, 27 November 2023 (UTC)Reply