Talk:Ariadne-class corvette/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 07:57, 22 August 2018 (UTC)

This article is in great shape. A few comments:

• link ship commissioning for decommissioned in the lead and in the Ariadne subsection
  • Done
• suggest starting the Design section with mention of the fleet plan, including the screw corvettes, then the specific order for these corvettes, then the design work info
  • Good idea
• the infobox says 12 officers, body says 13 minimum
  • Fixed
• what rig did the later ships have? Is a barque rig a full rig per infobox?
  • Fixed
• shouldn't the infobox have speed per design, rather than sea trials speed?
  • Probably so
• same for power
  • As above
• were the guns all in broadside? If not, where were they positioned?
  • Clarified
• suggest "but a severe storm forced her to leave before a settlement could be reached in order to avoid being damaged."
  • Works for me
• File:Korvette SMS Ariadne 1871 (IZ 57-288) - no text.jpg and File:Hermann Penner - Luise - Illustrirte Zeitung 1873.jpg need an author year of death for the current licences
  • Fixed the first one, but the Penner illustration already has his year of death.

That's me done. Nice work. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:49, 22 August 2018 (UTC)

Thanks! Parsecboy (talk) 20:38, 22 August 2018 (UTC)

No prob. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:52, 23 August 2018 (UTC)