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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Flavius Arinthaeus/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 02:49, 24 August 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:49, 24 August 2018 (UTC)
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Prose Suggestions
editPlease note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
- Flavius Arinthaeus (died AD 378) was a Roman soldier suggest:
- Flavius Arinthaeus (died AD 378) was a Roman officer
- Done.
- He was one of the clique of senior officers who elected Jovian to the throne, and may have played a similar role in the election of Valentinian. suggest:
- He was part of a faction of senior officers who elected Jovian to the throne, and may have played a similar role in the election of Valentinian.
- Not done. It wasn't a faction. Happy to change "clique", but I can't think of an alternate, accurate word or phrase.
- He died in 378 while occupying one of the two most senior military positions of the Eastern Roman Empire. suggest:
- He died in 378 while serving as Magister peditum, one of the two most senior military positions of the Eastern Roman Empire.
- where Arinthaeus was instrumental in securing a victory against the enemy in difficult circumstances are said difficulties known, or do sources merely state that it was difficult?
- Just that they were difficult. Unfortunately.
- He was wounded in a minor skirmish and died suggest:
- Julian was wounded in a minor skirmish and died
- Done.
- Valens accused Traianus of cowardice, but thanks to the support of the Magistri Militum Arinthaeus and Magister Equitum Victor suggest:
- Valens accused Traianus of cowardice, but thanks to the support of Arinthaeus and the Magister Equitum Victor
- Done.
- @Gog the Mild: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:35, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
- As a side note, would you consider reviewing my FAC, Tetricus I, if you have time? Thanks! -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:36, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
- @Iazyges: You have a good eye for my poor phraseology. Thank you. Tetricus, of course. Gog the Mild (talk) 20:17, 29 August 2018 (UTC)