Talk:Aruba at the 2008 Summer Olympics/GA3
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Sp33dyphil in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil "Ad astra" 08:35, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
- What country is Aruba? I dare say that a lot of readers would have no clue what it is.
- "Beijing, People's Republic of China."
- "Comité Olimpico Arubano" italicise, since it's a foreign term.
- "did not medal." any missing word?
- "Olympic games by 2008,
wherewhen its entrance" by the way, games should be capitalised. - "aboard
theKLM Flight 765" the implies that Flight 765 has received significant coverage, which I don't think it has, or was mentioned earlier in the article. - "Judo at the 2008 Summer Olympics - Qualification" should replace hyphen with dash.
- "for FINA by doing well" please spell FINA's full name because it's the first time the organisation is mentioned.
- "List of Flagbearers Bejing [sic] 2008" why's there a "[sic]" tag?
Fixed sans the first issue, since not sure what I can do besides have the link in the first word. As for the sic tag, Beijing is spelled wrong (Bejing). Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:25, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
Assessment
edit- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- End note
Very happy with the article – no major problems, and it complies with GA standards. Hope this will get FA status. Sp33dyphil "Ad astra" 00:22, 2 August 2011 (UTC)