Talk:Asas '50

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Major CE overhaul

I've just finished some substantial editing on this article. Issues I addressed substantially include:

• tone, including removal of puffery, statements with problematic POV, and categorically unverifiable claims
• grammar
• conciseness and readability
• consistency of style (for example, ASAS 50, Asas 50, and ASAS '50 were all standardized to Asas '50).

Please take a moment to review my work, as I may have misinterpreted some factual aspects of the article due to difficulty discerning the intention of the original authors. I believe this page could benefit from some attention from someone who is familiar with languages of potential additional sources, such as Malaysian or Indonesian. The English-language sources are limited, so I was unable to help the article as far as sourcing is concerned.

This article seems to describe an important piece of Malaysian history, and I believe it deserves more attention that I am able to give it!

Thanks. Skeletor3000 (talk) 22:42, 25 November 2019 (UTC)