Talk:Asiana Airlines Flight 733

Class review

Hi, just made minor edits added "members" to make it 2 crew members and replaced "Japanese passengers who were among" with "Japanese nationals among" Aidaja12 (talk) 00:58, 25 October 2014 (UTC)

Great article! My only suggestions would be to expand on the statement, "Mokpo Airport was only equipped with VOR/DME." pnwkev 01:02, 27 October 2014 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pnwkev (talk • contribs)

Hi @Xxdboixx: This was really informative! I made a few grammatical revisions; but other than that, everything read really well and was well-cited. Nice job! Uclisa (talk) 06:10, 28 October 2014 (UTC)

Quick comments

These are addressed to anyone, but Xxdboixx was working on expanding the article:

• The sources we have here could be converted to templates (see the citation template gadget on the top of the edit window) to avoid link rot, in most cases noting the author, date and work the source was published in. That way if the link goes dead other readers can replace it with an archive link or otherwise divine what to do. If it's a bare link they won't have much luck.

Otherwise the article seems pretty good. You can probably remove the "new article" template at the top of the page whenever you like. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:14, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

Incorrect Photo

The article's photo depicts a Boeing 737-400 instead of a Boeing 737-500. These aircraft, although of the same type, are vastly different in size. Please upload a photo with the correct aircraft variant.76.88.118.8 (talk) 23:29, 27 November 2015 (UTC)

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Did two passengers REALLY survive the crash of Japan Airline Flight 123? Or were they witnesses from the ground?

So when I expanded by translating the Korean version of article, I found out that too passengers claimed to have survived the crash of Japan Airlines Flight 123. I highly doubt it though, plus, they might have been witnesses on the ground. However I need other's thoughts before I can remove that part. Tigerdude9 (talk) 20:56, 27 October 2018 (UTC)