Talk:Assassin's Creed Origins/GA1
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Reviewer: ProtoDrake (talk · contribs) 23:45, 25 February 2021 (UTC)
I'll take this one on. If I haven't gotten back with comments and suchlike by Friday next week, ping me. --ProtoDrake (talk) 23:45, 25 February 2021 (UTC)
@OceanHok: It's generally looking very good. One think I'd ask, is there a different but still illustrative gameplay image you could use? That one's cropped almost to 4:3, when the original game's 16:9, and chops out UI elements. I looked at the image history and saw your original upload had a watermark, but is there a different image you could use? --ProtoDrake (talk) 19:41, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
- I have uploaded a new screenshot. OceanHok (talk) 09:52, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
- Comments
Alright, here's my review comments.
- The statement in the lead about the ratio of developers is the reverse of what's described in the Dev section. Which is correct?
- In "Gameplay", do we need to know Bayak's story role for the gameplay? You can just transfer the links to the Plot section.
- In the Plot section, do we need to define Akhenaten as monotheistic, unless it's specifically a mentioned and important point in-game? Can't we just say he worshipped the PoE as the Aten?
- In "Development", there's excessive repetition of 'the team'.
- There's no need to link US Gamer, just say "in a later interview" or something similar.
- "Actress Alix Wilton Regan voiced Aya..[53]" - Two full stops.
- In "Release", I can't see anything about the Amazon Luna release.
- In "Reception", it's not strictly a fail factor I think, but there's rather a lot of quotes used in the prose.
@OceanHok: Also, last note on the gameplay image. The image's name and summary section are now inaccurate, and you didn't update the image source. --ProtoDrake (talk) 15:00, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
- @ProtoDrake: - I think I have addressed most of the problems listed here. I cannot find a source that explictly say Origins was added to Amazon Luna (though I can find news about Ubisoft+ which contains Origins launching on Luna). OceanHok (talk) 17:10, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
- @OceanHok: Sorry for the long delay for a reply. I think this article merits as a Pass. --ProtoDrake (talk) 16:01, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
- @ProtoDrake: - I think I have addressed most of the problems listed here. I cannot find a source that explictly say Origins was added to Amazon Luna (though I can find news about Ubisoft+ which contains Origins launching on Luna). OceanHok (talk) 17:10, 7 March 2021 (UTC)