Talk:Astolat Dollhouse Castle

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Jackmcbarn in topic Issues

Issues

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Here's some clarification about the issues that led me to add maintenance tags I did:

  • The "Layout and floor plan" and "Interior decoration" sections don't seem important enough to both be top-level sections.
  • Too many sentences start with "It/These/They/There".
  • The lead section is currently a single, long sentence.
  • A lot of things are either linked and shouldn't be, or not linked and should be. Examples: "scale" shouldn't be linked, but some of the inspiring authors' names should be.

Jackmcbarn (talk) 20:31, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply