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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk06:23, 26 January 2021 (UTC)Reply

 
Astoria Pool

Created by Epicgenius (talk). Self-nominated at 16:57, 15 January 2021 (UTC).Reply

  Interesting park with a history, on fine sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. The image is licensed and a good illustration, best matched with the original hook. Thank you for detail such as the list of old and new streetnames! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:32, 15 January 2021 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Astoria Park/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Comments

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  • Add alt text to every image being used.
  • "pool and bathhouse was" → "pool and bathhouse were"
  • Remove the comma after "glass brick columns".
  • "local resident" - is "local" necessary (both times)?
  • "grand stands" should be one word.
  • "play field" should be one word.
  • "a playground and a restroom on the pool's southwest side was" → "a playground and a restroom on the pool's southwest side were"
  • "northern playground and its restroom was" → "northern playground and its restroom were"
  • "Ssome" - typo?
  • Wikilink The New York Times and Robert Moses.

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 01:05, 10 July 2021 (UTC)Reply