Talk:Audience immersion
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Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 06:47, 30 September 2021 (UTC)
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- ... that the use of audience immersion in video games has been studied as a strategy for promoting behavior change for the implementation of public health objectives? Source: Lu, Amy Shirong; Baranowski, Tom; Thompson, Debbe; Buday, Richard (June 2012). "Story Immersion of Videogames for Youth Health Promotion: A Review of Literature". Games for Health Journal. 1 (3): 199–204. doi:10.1089/g4h.2011.0012. ISSN 2161-783X. PMC 3833363. PMID 24416639.
- ALT1:... that sound design techniques such as playing binaural recordings through headphones has been used to create audience immersion in theatrical performances? Source: "How sound design is reinventing the way we experience theatre". Happy Mag. 2021-03-17. Retrieved 2021-09-15.
- Reviewed: Breaking the Fourth Wall (WandaVision)
Expanded by Premeditated Chaos (talk). Self-nominated at 04:19, 15 September 2021 (UTC).
- Reviewing. DTM (talk) 10:13, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
While the status reads "created", a more accurate one would be "expanded", irrespective of the situation of the article before the current expansion. The article is now 1674 characters (252 words), this is long enough. Nominated on time. Earwigs copyvio detector doesn't pick up much.- Both hooks are present in the article, both supporting references are also in the article. With respect to ALT0 and the associated content in the article, please could you expand it with an additional line for some more detailing or context? (This is a DYK nom suggestion rather than a necessity). ALT1 could be shortened to "... that
sound design techniques such as playingbinaural recordings through headphones has been used to create audience immersion in theatrical performances?" - Please add the names of the authors to citations 6 and 7. I don't see much else to point out, however once you've made these small changes, I will have a final look. Cheers. DTM (talk) 11:13, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
- DiplomatTesterMan, the created/expanded thing is my mistake, I forgot to click the right field on the DYK script I use. I've expanded the article as much as I'm interested in right now, but I may come back to it at another time. Not sure I agree with the shortened version of ALT1, I don't think it gives the reader enough context. Author names in citations aren't mandatory for DYK, but I've added them. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 22:44, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
ALT0 and ALT1 are gtg in their current states. DTM (talk) 03:34, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
- DiplomatTesterMan, the created/expanded thing is my mistake, I forgot to click the right field on the DYK script I use. I've expanded the article as much as I'm interested in right now, but I may come back to it at another time. Not sure I agree with the shortened version of ALT1, I don't think it gives the reader enough context. Author names in citations aren't mandatory for DYK, but I've added them. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 22:44, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
