Talk:Ava–Hanthawaddy War (1401–1403)
Latest comment: 1 month ago by Munfarid1 in topic a small change in the lead
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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 15:55, 10 October 2024 (UTC)
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- ... that King Minkhaung I of Ava lamented that King Razadarit of Hanthawaddy had so far invaded his country without "breaking a sword or a lance"?
- Source: Chronicle source: Hmannan Yazawin Vol. 1 2003, page 455.
Improved to Good Article status by Hybernator (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 114 past nominations.
Hybernator (talk) 22:58, 23 September 2024 (UTC).
No problems detected, date, size, hook, QPQ, etc. all GTG. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 15:21, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
a small change in the lead
editHello Hybernator, even though this amazing article has been reviewed as GA, I would like to suggest a small change in the lead. The following sentence seems misleading: "It was the second of the decades-long wars between the two kingdoms, both located in present-day Myanmar." - In fact, it is not the historical kingdoms, but their territory that is located in present-day Myanmar. - So changing this sentence would be clearer: "It was the second of the decades-long wars between the two kingdoms, whose historical territory is located in present-day Myanmar." - What do you think? Munfarid1 (talk) 11:40, 20 October 2024 (UTC)