Talk:Aventuras en el mundo del futuro
Latest comment: 5 years ago by HenryCrun15 in topic Working on a full rewrite
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Working on a full rewrite
editLooking to hit the following:
GrammarRemoving promotional materialFact checkingStructure of articleUpdating with latest researchAdding images, if possiblenot done, no free images available and I wouldn't be able to ask the rights-holderLink with Spanish version of article and make redirects for other namesLinking to webcomic itself- (Optional) Editing the Aula365 article, which contains a lot of the same content
HenryCrun15 (talk) 04:01, 23 October 2019 (UTC)
- OK, I've completed my rewrite of the article. Things that still could be improved are:
- The article has no image. There's no free images out there and I don't speak enough Spanish to try to contact the copyright holder.
- There are no sources around the plot, and I can't even find an archived version to confirm what's written here.
- Some more detail on exactly how the project was run would be nice.
- Name of article: I believe that the name of the comic was "Aventuras en el mundo del futuro", which would translate into English as "Adventures in the World of the Future"; I believe the project might have been called "Cómic Social 365", and the original English Wikipedia article was called "365 Social Comic". Someone may wish to work out the most appropriate title.
- Did this comic lose the Guinness record to "The Perilous Plights of Peter Pumpkinhead"? Or did it lose it to someone else, and "...Peter Pumpkinhead" just happens to be current record holder?
- A sanitising of citations is needed. Most citations are duplicates of other ones, presumably repeating a press release?
I feel as if something may be missing
editIf it's a webcomic, shouldn't there be a link to its site? —Tamfang (talk) 04:28, 23 October 2019 (UTC)
- I have added what I believe to the original comic website, but it no longer works. The URL does give a page in Wayback Machine, but crucially the comic image is missing. HenryCrun15 (talk) 04:01, 24 October 2019 (UTC)