Talk:Awakening (Star Trek: Enterprise)

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 02:53, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

• The guest actors in the infobox need a citation.

• Done. I don't know why I keep forgetting that! Miyagawa (talk) 18:07, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

• " Vulcan government seek to make the Enterprise leave orbit so they can attack the Syrrannites" -- You should probably note the Syrrannites are a renegade faction of Vulcans hiding on their planet. This kind of detail is important since the lead is supposed to be so general.
• " and afterwards the Andorians." -- here it might help to note they are longstanding enemies on the edge of war for awhile.

• Added the above two into the lead. Miyagawa (talk) 18:07, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

• "Plot" Might need a few highlights from the previous episode. It's sort of hard to follow as-written, even as someone who's seen both episodes and reviewed the first article.

• I've added an additional paragraph to plot to summarise the earlier episode. I fully admit it hadn't occurred to me and I'll keep it in mind for future multi-part episodes (although its really only season four of Enterprise and most of DS9 that had differently named multi-part episodes in Star Trek). Miyagawa (talk) 18:07, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

• "However, Archer continues to see the vision who informs him that he must find the Kir'Shara." -- You should explain what the Kir'Shara is.

• Done. Miyagawa (talk) 18:07, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

• "Filming started on September 23..." -- note the year here, again, so it's clear.

• Done. Miyagawa (talk) 18:07, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

• No duplicate links. No disambiguation links. External links look good.
• The image appears to be properly licensed. I see no problems with article stability or neutrality.

Placing the article on hold pending improvements. —Ed!^(talk) 03:24, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

Great work. Passing the GA. —Ed!^(talk) 11:00, 26 April 2013 (UTC)