Talk:Ayodele Awojobi/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ankit Maity (talk · contribs) 16:02, 14 July 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   • Copy-editing is required. For example, "Born in Oshodi, Lagos State, Awojobi’s father, Chief Daniel Adekoya Awojobi, was a stationmaster at the Nigerian Railway who hailed from Ikorodu in Lagos State.". Here, the phrases are unconnected. You know, there is no relation of him/his father (I couldn't understand what you meant, please clarify) with his father being a stationmaster.
   • What's the point in having common wikilinks like vibration and you know that a wikilink should point to the correct location. Such as, its completely nonsense to point "exceptionally and rarely awarded to a scholar under the age of forty" to "Doctor of Science".
   • The lead should adequately summarize the content of the article.
   • The section headings are completely weird. You can't get anything out of it. (Please change them)

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   • Add references for all {{cn}} tags.
   • Web references need the author, publisher, publishing date and access date.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   • An image caption should only end with a full-stop if it forms a complete sentence.

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

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