Talk:Azem Hajdari/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:49, 20 August 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:49, 20 August 2011 (UTC)

After a quick review, I'm seeing many issues that prevent this article from being near GA status:

• The Education and Public service sections are completely unsourced.
• The majority of the article is about the assassination and other attempts. It feels like undue weight currently, if possible add more on his time in parliament.
• "On 1993 until 1994: Studied English language and philosophy in the United States and at 1996" a colon is not needed there, write it out as a complete sentence.
• "He was one of the main leaders of student demonstrations that brought the collapse of the Party of Labour of Albania in December 1990" this seems like a major point in his life; surely more than the one sentence can be found to add in for that time?
• A lot of the references aren't entirely formatted; dates, publishers, and accessdates need to be added in.
• Cite ref #17 (books.google.nl) like you did ref #12; cite the book's publication details rather than Google books.
• "He was surrendered to the Commissariat One Police Forces," He surrendered to the.

Once the above is fixed, have the article copyedited over at WP:GOCE. In the meantime, I will have to fail this as a GA nomination. When everything is addressed, the article can be renominated. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:49, 21 August 2011 (UTC)