Talk:Babel Proclamation

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Tkbrett in topic GA Review

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by DanCherek (talk14:25, 12 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

5x expanded by Eddie891 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:26, 3 March 2021 (UTC).Reply

  •   Newness requirement satisfied by > 5x expansion from 400 characters to 4,000 characters. Article is long enough and appears policy compliant. Earwig detects no issues. Hooks are short enough, interesting, and supported by in-line citations. Subscription required for access to Iowa Heritage Illustrated but accuracy is assumed in good faith from established user/administrator. QPQ still needed. Cbl62 (talk) 18:07, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tkbrett (talk · contribs) 19:49, 4 June 2021 (UTC)Reply


After writing a couple of articles about anti-German sentiment, I'm excited to give this one a go. I'll do a review by Monday at the latest. Tkbrett (✉) 19:49, 4 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

Lead

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  • The proclamation was controversial: expand on this; the body mentions that the proclamation was popular among English speakers and unpopular among everyone else.
  • Image is definitely PD.

Rise in anti-German sentiment

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  • Good.

Description

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  • Theodore Roosevelt needs to be introduced as "Former US President", or something along those lines.
  • After World War I ended, the proclamation was repealed...: who repealed it? Harding?

Legacy

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  • An op-ed published in The Des Moines Register...: when?
  • A hearing in the United States House of Representatives...: when?

References

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  • Checking against all of the sources, the article is well sourced.
  • Copyvio score of 9.9% (violation unlikely).

Final comments and verdict

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  On hold: Eddie891, a nice little article which only needs a few tweaks. I made some copy edits and slight rewordings as well. Tkbrett (✉) 00:54, 8 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

Thanks, Tkbrett, I've attempted to institute your comments essentially directly. Let me know what you think. Eddie891 Talk Work 01:24, 8 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
 Pass: all looks and reads good to me. Congrats on another! Tkbrett (✉) 01:57, 8 June 2021 (UTC)Reply