Talk:Bad Blood (2004)/GA1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by ThinkBlue in topic GA Review

GA Review

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  • Two featured bouts were featured on hmm. very very similar to Bad Blood 2003. Featured is repetitive.
  • WWE's brand, a storyline expansion of the promotion where employees are assigned to wrestling brands "{WWE's brand)" isn't a storyline expansion. Raw, SD, and ECW are but "WWE's brand" is not
    • I think I got it.
  • The main rivalry rivalry repetitive.
  • World Heavyweight championship capitalize the "c" in championship
  • On the May 24 episode of Raw, Triple H pleaded with Bischoff to lift Michaels suspension and reinstate him back in the roster, when did Michaels get suspended?
  • the roster were in unsuccessful in doing so. ---> the roster was unsuccessful in doing so.
  • The result of the fight gave Bischoff the authority to schedule how did the result of a fight give him authority?
  • World Heavyweight championship again with the lowercase "c"
  • keep consistency with "championship" and "title" pick either "World Heavyweight Championship" or "the title"
  • [performed a chokeslam] lifted Eugene by the throat and slammed him down to the mat remove [performed a chokeslam] and end the link at "slammed"
  • Intercontinental champion the lowercase "c" again (twice more)
  • Intercontinental title keep consistency again (twice more)
  • remove ["killed off"]
  • explain a legend vs. legend killer match
  • make it two on one could use better wording
  • Jargon for removal: spinning heel kick
  • Jargon for removal: Arm trap crossface
  • security wall --> security barricade
  • Remove this sentence "Back and forth action took place between Orton and Benjamin."
  • Intercontinental title again
  • Remove this sentence "The match was controlled by Victoria, Stratus, Lita, and Kim in several spots in the match."
  • Lita then drove Kim's head into the mat, as Lita went for the pin, Stratus rolled Lita up for the pinfall victory, thus Stratus' becoming Women's champion for a fifth time. run-on. split into two sentences.
  • Jargon for removal: feint leg drop
  • World Heavyweight title, again
  • The Divas match and the Eugene/Coachman match are preliminary matches. Only the last two are main event matches, so change the first sentence of the WHC paragraph to the first main event match.
  • Triple H got the advantage, as he was able to counter a drop Michaels on his head do you meant "to counter AND drop Michaels on his head"
  • Triple H bring the steel steps and hit Michaels with it change to "with them"
  • and performed a dove with his elbow cocked onto Triple H's chest --> and performed a dive with his elbow cocked onto Triple H's chest
  • other on-screen talent should be in the event section
  • write at the start, that Lita being pregnant was scripted
  • World Heavyweight championship, twice again
  • World Heavyweight title, thrice again
  • This scenario led to Edge to sneak behind Orton and speared him. tense issues
  • Intercontinental championship, again
  • Canadian Online Explorer should be in italics.
  • refs are not needed in the results table, and link everything in the table as it is an exception to WP:OVERLINK
  • Online World of Wrestling, PWWEW.net, ProWrestlingHistory, have not been proven reliable, so they all need to be replaced
  • the publisher needs to be changed from WWE to World Wrestling Entertainment.

Long list, but you have a week to complete it. Best of luck, iMatthew (talk) 17:47, 6 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

Got everything, but left some comments. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:17, 7 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

GA pass. iMatthew (talk) 23:32, 7 September 2008 (UTC)Reply