Talk:Baila Esta Cumbia/GA2
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Carbrera in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 00:13, 21 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
edit- Please include a detailed description in the "Alt" parameter
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- This is purely stylistic preference, but instead of using commas in the parameters' spaces, you could use a flatlist
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Lead
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edit- Please put the English translation in quotation marks as such: (English: "Dance to this Cumbia")
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- "It was released as the second single by EMI Latin, behind "Ya Ves"." --> "It was released as the second single by EMI Latin on August 28, 1990, behind "Ya Ves".'
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Paragraph 2
edit- "The track received exposure on radio stations predominately played cumbia music, and as a result the recording became a hit single for the singer." --> "The track received exposure on radio stations that predominately played cumbia music, and as a result the recording became a hit single for the singer."
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- "It was named among her best recordings in her career by musicologist." What musicologist?
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Background and release
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edit- Remove the comma after "United States" please. (You only put a comma before "and" if what follows the "and" can be a complete thought or sentence on its own, and in this case it doesn't work.)
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- Please put an apostrophe after "Selena y Los Dinos"
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- Rest is good! :)
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Reception and impact
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edit- You could include a lead–in/topic sentence for this section stating whether or not the single received positive or negative reviews from music critics!
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- Rest is fantastic!
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Cover versions
edit- "Mexican singer Yuridia performed "Baila Esta Cumbia" during her tour in Mexico in 2013 to a positive reception.[12]" --> Reference #12 doesn't state any of this.
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Charts
edit- "Chart (2012/2013/2014))" --> "Chart (2012–14)"
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End of GA Review:
editJust some minor fixes, nothing major. Great work and @PING me here with any questions, comments, or concerns. Thank you and good luck! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:27, 21 June 2016 (UTC).
- @Carbrera: I have fixed all issues you have raised during your review. – jona ✉ 14:37, 21 June 2016 (UTC)
- Great! Thanks for your quick responses. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 17:12, 21 June 2016 (UTC)