Talk:Baker family/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Greenish Pickle! (talk · contribs) 12:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 23:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

Will get to this soon Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 23:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

Six GA Criteria

1. Article is well-written.

2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.

3. Broad in coverage. Covers multiple aspects of the subject.

4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.

5. Article appears stable. No notable instances of vandalism I can see.

6. Only one fair use image. Rationale appears good.

Lead

-Looks good.

Concept and creation

-Looks good.

The Baker Family

-Who is Ethan? The reporting crew seems set up as the protagonists in the description, but it seems like Ethan is the actual protagonist.

-Ethan is hyperlinked in Jack's description but not in his first mention earlier.

-Is the "various footage" claim in Marguerite's section cited?

-" It is later revealed that Eveline had taken control of the Baker family after they took in her and Mia from a shipwreck, and before their infection, the Bakers were just an ordinary family." this seems like a repeat of already known information at the end of Marguerite's section.

-The description states Eveline is a child, but Eveline's section only refers to her as an old lady. Is the child an illusion? I'd elaborate.

-What is the Mutamycete?

Reception

-Looks good.

Overall

Very well done article overall. Will be happy to pass once the above is addressed. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 02:20, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

• Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 Done. About eveline being old, I added more info about her [1]. Greenish Pickle! (🔔) 02:32, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

  Looks good. Happy to pass this article. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 02:45, 15 April 2024 (UTC)