Talk:Ballast Island (Japan)/GA1

Latest comment: 8 months ago by Generalissima in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 19:23, 2 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • Pretty short article; I get that there isn't much coverage of it, but after some digging I found some sources covering snorkeling in the region (1), and some scientific papers that mention some of the fish found there (1, 2, 3, 4). Two of these fish have holotypes or lectotypes from the island, so they definitely seem worth mentioning.
    • Added these to the article. -G
  • "gravely composition" Think this is supposed to be "gravelly".
    • Fixed. - G
  • What's settlement dispersal?
    • Sediment, my bad. - G
  • "a size it has largely remained since" sounds weird, maybe "remaining around this size since"?
    • Good change, fixed. - G
  • Images are fine. Spot-checked both the English-language sources, AGF-ing on the Japanese one for obvious reasons.
  • That's all. AryKun (talk) 14:58, 3 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
@AryKun: Made changes per your recommendations, thank you so much! Generalissima (talk) 17:54, 3 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
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