Talk:Banksia blechnifolia/GA1
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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 19:47, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
- Another day, another Banksia, it seems (I was surprised to see there is an entire Wiki project[1] devoted to a single genus). I'll review this soon. FunkMonk (talk) 19:47, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
- and it wasn't even me who set that up... Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:21, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
- Perhaps the infobox photo could get a caption. The image description states it is cultivated, but does this mean it differs in any way from wild specimens?
- added. no Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:21, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
- Subgenus and other abbreviations could be spelled out at first mention.
- unabbreviated Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:21, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
- " herringbone" What's that?
- It is herringbone pattern - namely the leaf lobes arise at an angle and hence give the leaf a herringbone pattern Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:58, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- Shouldn't the first letter in the taxobox caption be capitalised?
- done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:58, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- Some technical terms need links throughout (such as petiole, perianth, etc.).
- linked a few. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:10, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- "cuneate (wedge-shaped) seed", "wedge-shaped (cuneate)". I think one gloss of this is enough...
- removed extra. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:10, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- "diameter" Should this be diametre?
- heh...no.... Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:58, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- The intro seems very short. More description?
- expanded. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:10, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- "mistakenly calling it Banksia pinnatisecta in the process" How come?
- he just used a synonym is all. took out "mistakenly" might see what else I can find on it Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:23, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- Ok, I'll pass this now. How many Banksias left to go? FunkMonk (talk) 12:59, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- about 150... Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:35, 8 April 2018 (UTC)