Talk:Bartram Trail High School

Latest comment: 8 years ago by InternetArchiveBot in topic External links modified

This page reads more like a promotional pamphlet for Bartram Trail High School and sections of it, especially Music, show no fact and are highly opinionated. --Ryan5191 —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ryan5191 (talkcontribs) 19:22, 11 November 2008 (UTC)Reply

Neutraity of the "Music" section.

edit

This section seems to have a few words and phrases that make it's neutrality questionable. Examples: "Over the years, it has emerged into one of the premier high school marching bands of Northeast Florida winning competitions around the state." and "BTHS boasts a wind symphony that is also an elite music program in Northeast Florida." These sentences don't cite any sources backing up their claims. Also, whether a musical ensemble is a "Premier high school marching band" or "elite" and is a matter of personal opinion, not fact. Simply stating opinions is discouraged on Wkikpedia. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Splew (talkcontribs) 05:09, 27 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

edit

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 10 external links on Bartram Trail High School. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true or failed to let others know (documentation at {{Sourcecheck}}).

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

  • If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
  • If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 21:22, 27 October 2016 (UTC)Reply