Talk:Basic Lupine Urology/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 17:43, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• Two references for the production code seems like WP:OVERKILL. I suggest removing one.
  • Done.
• Didn't find any problems with the article's lead.
• In the plot summary, change "have a motive" to "have had a motive" since the yam is already dead.
  • Done.
• I advise archiving the article's sources in case they're deleted.
  • Done. (Though the archive for source 2 seems to be acting up for me – it says it's archived, but it won't load. I'll try looking into it more over the next few days if needed.)
• No problems with images, production, or information on reception, however, remove the IMDb reference per WP:IMDB/BLP.
  • I assume this refers to the comments in the Reception section, not the IMDb link in External links, in which case – done.

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Notes

• @RunningTiger123: I have added nearly all my suggestions for this article. Great job on expanding and improving it so far. Well, take a look at my suggestions, add comments, and please ping me when you have done so. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 17:43, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
  • @Some Dude From North Carolina: All suggested edits have been made. RunningTiger123 (talk) 04:52, 19 December 2020 (UTC)