Talk:Bassem Tamimi/GA1

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 20:24, 20 May 2013 (UTC) I shall review this article. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 20:24, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll look forward to your thoughts. Cheers, -- Khazar2 (talk) 21:27, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

Lead

Excellent.

Infobox

Fine.

Background

"Al-Tamimi was ten weeks old at the time of the Israeli occupation of the West Bank in June 1967 and hid with his mother in a cave during the conflict." Please wikilink the appropriate sections of the Six-Day War.

 Done -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:03, 22 May 2013 (UTC)

"Also a grassroots activist, he organized weekly demonstrations to protest the seizure of the village's well by the nearby Israeli settlement of Halamish, established in 1977." If you mean his mother was too, please state this.

Clarified this. -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:03, 22 May 2013 (UTC)

Excellent section.

March 2011 arrest and trial

Superb section. What I will say is that if you have recorded reactions from any other countries/entities, please include them.

Unfortunately, no, only the European Union quotation. It's possible some other Middle Eastern nations made comment, but I haven't found reference to this anywhere. (I'm linguistically limited to only English and French coverage, though, not Hebrew or Arabic.) -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:03, 22 May 2013 (UTC)

This is fine, I simply wondered. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:45, 22 May 2013 (UTC)

October 2012 arrest

"Bassem was released in early 2013." Just so that a reader is clear, please place this sentence at the end of the prior paragraph.

 Done -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:03, 22 May 2013 (UTC)

All else is good.

Personal life

This section is fine

Conclusion

I salute both your efforts and justifiable enthusiasm pertaining to this article. Excellent job! Once the outstanding issues are addressed, I will pass this article. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 17:43, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the time and the helpful suggestions. I think I've addressed your concerns, but just let me know if I missed anything or you see anything else. Cheers, -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:03, 22 May 2013 (UTC)