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More copy edit
editI've copy edited some more, shortening the plot and making it all flow a little better. Still requires some shortening I think, though I may not be in a good position to know which details are okay to be ommitted or shortened further. — Preceding unsigned comment added by KiefKief (talk • contribs) 15:23, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
Excessively detailed plot section
editI continue to work on reducing the detail present in the Plot section; however, as I am not familiar with the graphic novel, my editing might require further review and repair. I have engaged in such editing before and have been omitting details that do not seem essential.--Soulparadox (talk) 08:20, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- I still have some work remaining with this article and the Plot section will be complete shortly.--Soulparadox (talk) 05:11, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
Citations
editI am removing the Citations tag, as I believe the article contains sufficient references.--Soulparadox (talk) 02:19, 24 September 2012 (UTC)