Talk:Battle of Galveston Harbor (1862)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:47, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:47, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links OK
• Images appropriately licensed
• In "the" shoreline
  • Corrected
• Part of the Confederate coastline was within the state of Texas, and the most significant port at that time was Galveston. Awkward
  • Rephrased, is this better?
• more bases for Union ships and fewer bases for blockade runners. proximity alert for "bases"
  • Dropped the second one
• What kind of ships did Renshaw have?
  • Done. Thank goodness for DANFS.
• continue to fire would be bad political optics Suggest "against the laws of war"
  • Done
• Short but sweet--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:00, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
  • @Sturmvogel 66: - Are my changes satisfactory? Hog Farm _Talk 05:01, 28 May 2021 (UTC)