Talk:Battle of Lauron
Latest comment: 5 years ago by 73.47.8.174 in topic Rewrite of this article
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Rewrite of this article
editThis entire article needs to be rewritten to follow the standard objective telling of the events. Currently, it is written too dramatically, and doesn't include in-text sources when it mentions specific events taking place.
Also, the grammar and spelling is horrendous. I gave us trying to fix it since this needs to be rewritten anyway. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 73.47.8.174 (talk) 04:45, 31 December 2018 (UTC)