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editThis article needs a copyedit by a native English speaker.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:40, 11 September 2010 (UTC)
GA Nomination
editIt seems to me that this article could be nominated for GA status. I'm not an editor of the article, just a person who is a part of WP Spain that looks for potential GA articles. I wasn't intentionally looking for them today (or lately, for that matter), but this article is appears to be worthy for a review. If I'm providing an inconvience for the editor(s), I apologize in advance. Thanks for reading! LeftAire (talk) 22:55, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 19:57, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
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Infobox
edit- No issues
Lead
edit- The Battle of Orbetello (also known as the Battle of Isola del Giglio)[3] was a major naval engagement of the Franco-Spanish War of 1635, → End the first sentence here to comply with WP:BEGINNING
- ...when another Spanish army led by Marquis of Torrecuso and Duke of Arcos which had come from the Kingdom of Naples across the Papal States, → Add comma between "Arcos" and "which"
Background
edit- For this purpose was gathered in Toulon a fleet... → Fix prose of this phrase
Battle
edit- Fix the sentences where the sentences start with numbers that are not spelled out
Aftermath
edit- Fix the prose of the image description in this section to make it more understandable
Notes
edit- No issues
References
edit- No issues
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not concern good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 20:16, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
- Since all issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 (talk2me) 18:20, 1 July 2012 (UTC)