Talk:Battle of Pylos

Latest comment: 12 years ago by JustinBothwell in topic Untitled

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Can someone fix the box about Brasidas and Thrasymelidas--I cna't make it go away for some reason. Other than that, I think the article looks pretty good.

What's wrong with it? Adam Bishop 03:10, 17 March 2006 (UTC)Reply

This article needs cleanup. The article is written twice. Shauni 20:31, 24 March 2007 (UTC)Reply

I agree; we should pare down the intro significantly, listing only key points; as it stands there is too much detail in the lead, which makes the article feel repetitious. I'll make the changes in a few days if there is no dispute about this JustinBothwell (talk) 01:35, 28 May 2012 (UTC)Reply