Talk:Bauhaus Dessau Foundation

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Issues, minor and otherwise

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The article has a few too many of them, which I would appreciate help with ironing out.

The "History" section is either really poorly worded or an anachronic mess. Was it built in 1926, or was it the "historical" Bauhaus (which I assume was meant to be "original")?

What are the "three mainstays" of the Collection section? Was that line meant to be in the previous paragraph?

What exactly does the Workshop do? The Collection section collects things, the Academy teaches things (in English, apparently), and the Workshop... does both?

The entirety of the "Further Activities" section is worded like an ad. I can't tell if how much of it is exaggerated, or how to change it without original research, because the sources I found were really unhelpful.

And the lack of citations in general. There's one for the foundation in general (in German only, would enjoy a translation from something besides Google) and one that says "you can sleep here!!". cogsan (talk) 15:46, 23 January 2023 (UTC)Reply