Talk:Beautiful (MercyMe song)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 17:38, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

Taking over again here. Here are the issues I found:

• The lead's a little on the short side. I get the article's a short one but an extra sentence or so from the background could be useful.
  • Done
• The composition feels a bit lacking, but if that's all you can find then nothing more can be done there.
  • Merged it with the 'background' section.
• "Kevin Davis of Christianmusic review" Christian Music Review appears to be three separate words based on the ref.
  • Done
• Fix the number prefixes per my note in earlier GANs, though it doesn't seem too bad here.
  • Done;;;
• Since the music video's already a reference and noted in the article, the External links section is redundant.
  • Done

I'll put the article on hold and pass when fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:18, 26 December 2011 (UTC)

Everything looks good now. The background and composition sections in this case actually do look way better combined, so good move there. Article now passes as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:38, 26 December 2011 (UTC)

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