Talk:Beautiful Liar/GA1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Gary King in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Gary King (talk) 06:54, 25 August 2008 (UTC)Reply

I think I have addressed all your concerns. Thank you. --Efe (talk) 11:59, 29 August 2008 (UTC)Reply

Can a reference be added at the end of every paragraph (except the lead and information such as the description for the music video) just to make it perfectly clear that all of the information in the article is referenced? Gary King (talk) 03:57, 1 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

All are sourced. Except those raised above, but were removed already. --Efe (talk) 03:07, 2 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

Can you give the article another copyedit?

  • "Knowles confirmed their duet" – "Knowles confirmed her duet"?
  • "she had met Shakira several times at various awards shows over the recent years, " – "she met Shakira at awards shows over the recent years, "
  • "difficulties on matching their schedules." – "difficulties matching their schedules."

Etc. Gary King (talk) 15:09, 1 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

It looks good now. Passing. Gary King (talk) 04:43, 2 September 2008 (UTC)Reply