Talk:Beautiful People (Chris Brown song)

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Reviewer: Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 05:41, 13 July 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

2. Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Infobox

• "...Brown's fourth studio album F.A.M.E. (2011) on March 11, 2011." - The "2011" is not necessary with date at the end of the sentence
  •  Done Ozurbanmusic (talk) 00:39, 14 July 2011 (UTC)

Background and composition

• "Beautiful People" was released for digital download from March 11, 2011." - Change "from" to "on"
• "An extended play featuring additional remixes of the song, was made available..." - Add comma after "play"
• "Beautiful People" has R&B influences." - Start sentence with something besides song title to avoid repeating too much
• Add an audio sample as reference according to WP:SAMPLE.
  •  Done Ozurbanmusic (talk) 00:39, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
    • According to WP:SAMPLE#What is the maximum length permitted?, the length of the audio file needs to be less than 10%. Please edit the file to make it less than 10% of the original recording. - Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 00:49, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
      • I'm confused. Maybe I should get someone else to upload a sample? Ozurbanmusic (talk) 01:10, 14 July 2011 (UTC)

Critical reception

• No issues

Chart performance

• "Overall, it is Brown's fifth top-ten UK hit as a lead artist." - Needs reference
  •  Done Ozurbanmusic (talk) 00:39, 14 July 2011 (UTC)

Live performances

• No issues

Track listing

• No issues

Credits and personnel

• No issues

Charts and certifications

• No issues

Radio and release history

• No issues

References

• No issues

OVERALL REVIEW

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are many minor issues that are affecting the prose quality of the article. Other than that, a reference is needed for one statement and an audio sample is needed for the song. I will give you the general seven days to fix the mistakes and/or debate the items you believe do not affect GA status. - Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 20:12, 13 July 2011 (UTC)

I have re-uploaded the audio file to make it follow the rules of WP:SAMPLE. Because all of the issues have now been addressed, I now feel confident to pass this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work. - Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 01:33, 14 July 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Ozurbanmusic (talk) 01:36, 14 July 2011 (UTC)

Digital download

The digital download listed is from Australia and the tracks are called: 01 Beautiful People (Main Version) 02 Beautiful People (Club Version) Johnnyboytoy (talk) 03:04, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

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