Talk:Beautiful Store

About the beginning of May or the middle of May, we are going to translate all the information in ko:Wikipedia (Beautiful store 아름다운 가게) And then, find more information in Beautiful store's website etc after translating all contents in ko:Wikipedia.

You should be doing this RIGHT NOW. At the beginning of May you are supposed to be done, with the article in the process of review by the Wikipedia community. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 04:00, 19 April 2013 (UTC)

Updated to do list

We are contents is Beautiful store. First of all ,find more information in Beautiful store's website etc after translating all contents in ko:Wikipedia. And then we plus the contents and uploading the image.

Our Content`s are like this

1 Beautiful store

2 About Beautiful store

3 Introduce

4 History

5 Meaning of Beautiful Store

6 Effect of Beautiful Store

7 Extend of Beautiful Store

8 criticism of Beautiful Store

9 Reference

Also divided our role.

User:HaeYoon : Writing about history of beautiful store, Effect of Beautiful Store

And we will visit the beautiful store this week, we take some picture and uploading to our article. We will be finished our writing due to April 30.

Instructor review

What this article needs most at this point is copyediting for grammar, and restructuring the content into subsections. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 06:41, 30 May 2013 (UTC)

Content Removal

Apologies for the lack of detail in removing the content. The previous version of the article had been written more like a company brochure than a wikipedia article, presenting unnecessary company website information.

e.g. Introduction of sharing project - I removed this section as the pictures is an unnecessary detail that doesnt seem to fit the article. None of it is notable or verifiable really. they even wrote down their opening times, it came off more like an ad than a wiki article.

Reduced the History to the important things worth mentioning. I see the article has been further edited with titles removed, so doesn't seem to be much more one could write about this store thats really worth noting, pending some better references. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Peterfen (talk • contribs) 06:47, 31 August 2014 (UTC)

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