Talk:Belgium at the 1998 Winter Olympics

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:51, 16 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 07:51, 16 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
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Background

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  • Any info about the flag bearer for the closing ceremony?

Speed skating

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  • Add links in the prose to the individal events that Veldkamp competed in
  • "and would go on to represent Belgium at the 2002 Winter Olympics and 2006 Winter Olympics." - reword toand the 2006 Winter Olympics.
  • "He went out early and set a new world record" - link world record to List of world records in speed skating
  • "only to two more world records set that day," - change to only for two more world records to be set that day,
  • "he took part in the 1,500 metres," - how about participated for some variety?
  • "and finished with a time of 13 minutes and 29 seconds," - finished fourth

Reference

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  • Reference 8 is missing Sports Reference as its publisher

That is my lot. This article will be put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 10:34, 16 July 2018 (UTC)Reply