Talk:Believe It (Meek Mill song)/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Zmbro in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Zmbro (talk · contribs) 00:50, 25 February 2023 (UTC)
Got this one. – zmbro (talk) (cont) 00:50, 25 February 2023 (UTC)
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Overall looks nice and simple. Few comments:
- No recording dates or genre(s)?
- Sadly not. --K. Peake 10:57, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
- ""Believe It" received lukewarm reviews from music critics, who mostly praised Mill's performance. They were more mixed towards Rick Ross's appearance, while a few critics observed a lack of originality." would read better as ""Believe It" received lukewarm reviews from music critics. While Mill's performance was mostly praised, Rick Ross's appearance garnered a more mixed reception, while a few critics observed a lack of originality."
- properly introduce Meek Mill here: "In 2010, Rick Ross signed Mill to his label"
- Done for the above --K. Peake 10:57, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
- I struggle to see how the "After Mill alleged...of the album" sentences relate to this specific song and not their collaborations in general
- Comment: this gives context to the Dreams and Nightmares performance that is about their history, especially with this song being on the album. --K. Peake 10:57, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
- He shared the song on what? Social media?
- "struggle and triumph on the song could be felt and are "plainly articulated"," → "struggle and triumph on the song are "plainly articulated" and could be felt,"
- Done for the above --K. Peake 10:57, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
- "the song further reached number 38 on the US Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, which it spent two weeks on" → "the song also spent two weeks on the US Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, reaching number 38."
- Partly done --K. Peake 10:57, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
- References look solid, no complaints
Overall should be an easy pass. My only main concern is there's no info regarding genres or release dates? – zmbro (talk) (cont) 18:56, 25 February 2023 (UTC)
- Zmbro I searched long and hard, but unfortunately the genre and recording (not release) date are not available online. --K. Peake 10:57, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass – zmbro (talk) (cont) 15:05, 26 February 2023 (UTC)