Talk:Bermuda at the 2014 Winter Olympics/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:51, 16 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 07:51, 16 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Background

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  • "Bermuda first appeared in Olympic competition at the 1936 Berlin Summer Games, made their Winter Olympic Games debut in 1992 at the Albertville Games; and have appeared in every Olympics since their respective debuts bar one, " - this might be better Bermuda first appeared in Olympic competition at the 1936 Berlin Summer Games, and debuted in the Winter Olympic Games at the 1992 Albertville Games. They have appeared in every Olympics since their respective debuts bar one;
  • "the boycotted 1980 Summer Olympics in Moscow." - rewrite this sentence to they were one of 54 nations who boycotted the 1980 Summer Olympics in Moscow.
  • "there were n plans to withdraw unless Murphy felt unsafe," - no

Cross-country skiing

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That is all I have. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 09:31, 16 July 2018 (UTC)Reply