Talk:Bernard Foing/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Jezhotwells in topic GA Review

GA Review

edit

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Adavis444 (talk) 09:09, 13 August 2010 (UTC) From the Wikipedia:Good article criteria, GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteriaReply


As Adavis444 has not implemented a review, despite a reminder on their talk page, i am taking over this review. Jezhotwells (talk) 12:28, 28 August 2010 (UTC)Reply


I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: No dabs found.

Linkrot: No dead links found. Jezhotwells (talk) 12:33, 28 August 2010 (UTC)Reply

Checking against GA criteria

edit
GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    The lead does not adequately summarise the article. Please read WP:LEAD.
    Prose is reasonable.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    References appear OK, but few mention him in more than passing as an author.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    As a biography, this is not at all broad in its coverage, the article is primarily about projects that Foing has been involved in. As a BLP it is still stub class.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Non free images must not be used in the infobox or lead for BLPs, as per WP:Fair use#Images
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    I am failing this nomination at the present time as I feel that the article is not sufficiently broad in its coverage. The points about the lead and the non-free image also need to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 15:30, 28 August 2010 (UTC)Reply