Talk:Bertha Benz Memorial Route/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Dough4872 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 20:20, 30 January 2010 (UTC)Reply

  1. There is a tag at the top of the article calling for additional references.
  2. There are several areas of the article missing citations.
  3. The map should not be floating to the left of the infobox.
  4. The lead of the article is very short and does not adequately summarize the article.
  5. Headings have manual of style violations, such as "The Route".
  6. The Route section is poorly written.
  7. There are several short sections and one-sentence paragraphs in the article.
  8. The Sights section is a bulleted list that would look better as prose.
  9. There is a photo gallery in the article, which is not permitted.

Currently, this article has several major issues and is nowhere near meeting the GA criteria. Therefore, I will have to fail it. The article may be renominated once it is cleaned up. ---Dough4872 20:20, 30 January 2010 (UTC)Reply