Talk:Billionaire Ted/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:35, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:35, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• See WP:WAS for opening sentence.
• Expand the lead to summarize the entire article.
• "A following" doesn't sound right. reword
• Archive sources (you can use this).
• Do NOT use the "publisher" parameter for websites.
• Add the "use mdy dates" template to fix references.
• #3 is missing a date and an author name.
• #5 and #9 appear to be dead links.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: I have made the adjustments you requested, except the one about "publisher". The reason is because I would just like to ask a question because if I use "Website" or "work" it puts the title in italics and my understanding was that non-print sources (like ESPN) should be in regular text. What should I used instead? The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 09:52, 21 May 2021 (UTC)

@The C of E: I would suggest putting PW Torch, Den of Geek, and Goliath.com in italics. Also, #3 is still missing an author/date. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:54, 21 May 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done those. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 14:50, 21 May 2021 (UTC)