Talk:Bismil

Latest comment: 12 years ago by MrNiceGuy1113 in topic Brief History

Brief History

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I have added a brief history of this district along with the related references, kindly go through and discuss if you find anything irrelevant to this article. Thanks,Dr.'Krant'M.L.Verma (talkEmail)Krantmlverma (talk) 05:02, 17 October 2011 (UTC)Reply
Hello Sir.

I have just copyedited as well as the language allows, but at the end I find confusion:

"The town has a population is 56,887 (as of 2010) and features numerous parks."

What town are we talking about? The District capital? Or is it meant to be "District" and not "town"?

Many thanks, Mr. NIceGuy (MrNiceGuy1113 (talk) 19:25, 19 September 2012 (UTC))Reply