Talk:Blitz-class aviso

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Dank in topic GA Review
Good articleBlitz-class aviso has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starBlitz-class aviso is part of the Avisos of Germany series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 24, 2013Good article nomineeListed
January 28, 2021Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 20:12, 22 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Review:

  • "ships of any time": ships of any kind? - Dank (push to talk) 20:12, 22 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • "While serving as a torpedo boat flotilla leader": I'd prefer "When serving as torpedo boat flotilla leaders" or "When leading torpedo boat flotillas"
    • Fixed.
  • "speed this": this speed
    • Apparently I'm dyslexic periodically.
  • "The ships were also equipped with four 8.7 cm K L/23 guns in single mounts. They also carried one 35 cm (14 in) torpedo tube mounted in the bow.": The ships were also equipped with four 8.7 cm K L/23 guns in single mounts and one 35 cm (14 in) torpedo tube mounted in the bow.
    • Done.
  • "In 1891–1892": I'm fighting a losing battle here, but I think some readers are going to wonder what this means, if not "In 1891 and 1892". - Dank (push to talk) 20:23, 22 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
    • Sounds fine to me.
  • Otherwise:
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    - Dank (push to talk) 21:56, 22 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
    Thanks for reviewing the article, Dan. Parsecboy (talk) 16:30, 24 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Passed. - Dank (push to talk) 23:40, 24 June 2013 (UTC)Reply