Talk:Blitz Club
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editThe article is based on the corresponding German-language Wikipedia article. In the past days I thoroughly revised it in terms of language, tone and neutral point of view. In particular, I removed any adjectives and phrases that may be perceived as not presenting the club in a neutral manner, even if they come from independent sources.
Please note that the focus on the sound and club architecture is the result of the extensive media coverage of it, i.e. it is the main characteristic of the nightclub. The DJs, entry criteria and the restaurant were also often discussed by the media. The contents of the article in its present form are based on more than 50 reliable sources such as articles in news papers, news magazines and specialist magazines, all of which are independent of the subject.
I will continue to improve the article and look forward to joint development, but I think it is now ready for the mainspace. Rio65trio (talk) 16:58, 23 February 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you for your tremendous efforts, @Rio65trio! Fantastic work. I've added further edits today. As a native English speaker and professional translator (German to English), my focus was mostly on improving sentence structure, idiomacy and correcting minor grammatical errors. I made sure to cross-check any corrected text passages against the German original, but I'm sure an extra set of proofreading eyes wouldn't hurt! Mongrelmusings (talk) 18:15, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
Could someone kindly add an anchor link?
editI'd be grateful if someone could add an anchor link behind the last sentence of the "History and description" section (the one about Blitz Club also being host to a restaurant), and link it with/to the "Blitz restaurant" section.
I'm still quite new to Wiki editing and can't figure out how to do it.
Thank you! Mongrelmusings (talk) 18:19, 10 February 2024 (UTC)