Talk:Blood Drive (The Office)/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Reywas92 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Well-written
  • Good summary; I did see this episode. I made a few copyedits myself. My only problem is going too far in the cultural references. Mentioning natural selection isn't exactly cultural, and it definitely should not be explained in another whole sentence; just the link is fine. The same is for Minesweeper, just give a link. I see someone else commented the same thing on the talk page. You also overuse the phrase "a reference to".
Referenced
  • Very good.
Neutral
  • Yes
Stable
  • Yes
Images
  • Good.

Great article overall! I will pass when the above is addressed. Reywas92Talk 17:06, 22 June 2009 (UTC)Reply