Talk:Blood Relatives (Millennium)

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Millennium episode "Blood Relatives" has been compared to episodes of The X-Files and Cracker?
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 17:58, 3 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

Just a few issues:

  • Intro: Did the use of the quote received positive acclaim, or the episode?
  • Plot: "Black finds the name "Ray Bell" in the same newspaper as the victim's son's obituary, and deduces that the killer may been frequenting funerals before" I think you're missing an 'have' in between may and been
  • Plot: "He believes that the victim is his first, but that killing will; become easier for him." I don't follow the use of punctation
  • Reception: "finding that its depiction of the character of James Dickerson was added "some shades of gray" to the series' usual "black and white morality"." Remove 'was'

On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:26, 3 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

Think I've seen to all of these now. Thanks. GRAPPLE X 21:27, 3 March 2012 (UTC)Reply
Awesome. I pass.--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:48, 4 March 2012 (UTC)Reply