Talk:Bloody Mary (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GagaNutella (talk · contribs) 04:27, 16 March 2023 (UTC)

After the request for WP:COPYEDITORS, this article is almost ready for GA. My review:

• Wikilink Clinton Sparks in the infobox
• Delete the space between the infobox and the lead
• "Bloody Mary" is a song that was recorded by American singer Lady Gaga for her second studio album Born This Way (2011). → "Bloody Mary" is a song by American singer Lady Gaga recorded for her second studio album, Born This Way (2011).
• Gaga, Fernando Garibay, and Paul "DJ White Shadow" Blair produced the song, which was produced by Gaga, Blair, Garibay, and Clinton Sparks. → Gaga, Fernando Garibay, and Paul "DJ White Shadow" Blair wrote and produced it; Clinton Sparks also received producer credit.
• Bloody Mary isn't in italic
• Don't wikilink single
• Typo: alo → also
• "part of Lady Gaga's", simplify to Gaga
• Add the The Last Temptation of Christ's release year in brackets
• "Bloody Mary" is a slow-tempo → It is a slow-tempo
• Are Prefixmag and MuuMuse reliable?
• In November 2022, the song → In November 2022, "Bloody Mary"
• in streams of "Bloody Mary" → in the song's streams
• Put the sentence "On March 15, 2023," in the past
• is Season Two in caps? I don't think so
• "number 13", only 13
• The word "entered"is repetitive
• "Marry the Night" is overlinked
• After "number 31", delete all "number" words
• Again, simplify to just Gaga
• during the "absurdly bouncable beats" of "Bloody Mary" → during the "absurdly bouncable beats" of the song
• Images and references are fine
• Copy violation score is at 65.3%, but it's only because of the blockquote from Popjustice.

 On hold until all of the issues are fixed. GagaNutella^talk 04:27, 16 March 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for your review. I've addressed your notes, except for these:

• I didn't add a year to The Last Temptation of Christ, because the whole sentence is a quote, and it's not part of what the outlet said. Also, I cannot be sure if they meant the 1955 novel or the 1988 film by Scorsese, so I think it's better not to write anything.
• Are Prefixmag and MuuMuse reliable?

MuuMuse has been used in several Gaga articles with good article status, such as "Applause", "Born This Way", "Venus", "Monster", "Dope", "Til It Happens To You", etc.

Prefixmag doesn't exist anymore, but it used to be a reliable source, the review aggregator AnyDecentMusic? calculated Prexifmag's review into their consensus on Born This Way (http://www.anydecentmusic.com/review/3125/Lady-Gaga-Born-This-Way.aspx). Sricsi (talk) 11:38, 16 March 2023 (UTC)

That's great! I've just edited little details as well. Your contribution to this article was incredible! ✓ Pass now. GagaNutella^talk 15:02, 16 March 2023 (UTC)

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